Hello, I made some changes from your essay. Here is what I made. Hope that it could be a good reference for you.
From my perspective, being educated is the most primamry right of people. Children have the same right to go to school and adult have ones to learn at any age. Nevertheless, higher education should only be availble for the good students. Thus, I am off with the latter because of obstacles at higher education, wasting time and money and being professional.
To begin with, it is not easy for everyone to study at a university or college. Only student who recorded excellent achievement at high school should enter a university to study what he specialized in. Although the other studens who were not good enough can make huge effort for their further education at university or college, it is still tough for them, especially if they do not know where they are standing.
What is more, to studying at university or college sometimes watses your time and money. It costs a lot of money for books, transportation and extra-curricular activities. For some families who cannot afford to pay that amount of money, it is really a magnificant burdern. However, what deserves more attention is the period of time children spend at university without learning anything.
Lastly, It cannot be denied that university or college is a good place for students who desires to study more in the field they are interested in. The others who are not good at studying should get their own jobs in the society which can give them more opportunities to learn from experience and failures at their workplace. The considerably crucial thing is that they still can become experts in their major and devote for their country.
There is a saying by Albert Einstein that "Everyone is a genius, but if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live it whole life believe it is stupid". I strongly believe that all of us have the same right to learn. On the other side, we also have our own missions. Therefore, to study in university or not does not matter. The matter is that we know ourselves, what we are good at and how we can do to make this life better.