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Some people suggest higher education should be funded by the government, while others think that students should pay the course fees themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

In the recent days, there is a vast majority of students who desire to study in universities. While some people think that tertiary education fees should be paid by these students, I believe that government should spend their budget on supporting those individuals.

First of all, with the financial support, the qualification of human resources can be grown up significantly. Students can spend their comprehensive concentration on learning and gaining their knowledge without thinking about their burdens. Therefore, they can have enough time to balance between theory and practice, eventually, after graduating, those students can satisfy the requirements of employers so that these company’s efficiency can be enhanced associated with the high rate of national economic.

Moreover, there are numerous graduated students who have been worked as a communal contributors such as doctors, teachers, polices and soldiers. It is apparent that government have responsibility by giving a full studying condition for those people. For instance, policemen scarify almost their lifetime to secure our society; therefore, there is no doubt that the authorities are in charge of their higher education.

By contrast, there are various kinds of urge problems that the government has to solve such as upgrading infrastructure, improving health care system and ensuring national defense. It means that government cannot pay the tuition fees totally and individuals are responsible for their future career by selection suitable universities or being a worker after leaving high school.

In conclusion, with the personal attempt of students, it is likely to be that government should give better condition for students pursuing higher education.

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Bạn nên paraphrase keywords nhé: Student = scholar = under graduate = learner

government = authority = administration = management

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