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           The pie chart,combined with the table,provides an over view of 4 mains causes farmland becoming degraded and these causes effected three regions,mamely North America,Europe and Oceania during the 1990s.

           It can be seen in the pie chart that the highest percentage of 4 causes agriculture land becomes less productive was over-grazing with 35%. There was ver little difference in the reasons why farmland degradation between over-cultivation and deforestation,accounting for over two thirds of the main causes of the worldwide.Other reasons took up the remaining 7%.

            According to the table,the total land degraded in Europe was in the majority with 23%.Especially,two out of three causes had the highest proportion were deforestation an over-grazing (9.8% and 7.7% respectively).While the lowest rate of land degraded by damaging the forest were North America (0.2%).In 1990s,although Oceania brought out the best method,dropped over-cultivation to number zero,over-grazing was the primary cause affected this region with 11.3%.

           To summerise,the main cause,which make agriculture land becomes less productive,was over-grazing and this is the most affected three regions of the world.

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It is true that riding a biclycle is not prevalent among many people around the world although cycling is a better way to mitigate environmental contamination than other types of transport.Reasons for this vary, and steps need to be taken to promote the useage of bicycles.

I think that the first sentence which you used "better... than" structure is not correct. Because when you used "a better way" that is a noun, so it cannot connect with "than" . That means you should change a bit, for example "....rather than other types of transport".

"Reasons for this vary" does not make sense and impolite, maybe that should be changed in this way "reasons for this phenomenon will be discussed in this essay and resolutions need to be pointed out to promote the usage of bicycles".

To begin with, there are several reasons why few people use bicycles on a regular basis. 

few people regularly use bicyckes

 Firstly, these days people is often busier than before   ever. Many people have to take responsibility for a mountain of work at their working places; therefore, they want to spend less time on transport as much as possible.

This obviously causes  this is a dominant reason lead them to choose motor vehicles such as motorbikes or cars. 

 Another justification for this problem Another supportive explanation for the phemomenon is that today a number of people lead possess a sedentery lifestyle. 

Using bicycles consumes more energy than   needs more physical demand than  other types of transport, which deters people from choosing this means of transport. 

Firstly, the government should conduct  organize or held  suitable campaigns to raise public awareness of the detrimental  beneficial effects of motor vehicles bicycles on the environment.

thus people cycling can move faster than using the lanes of other types of transport.

thus, cyclists might move easier and faster on such lanes.

Finally, the government can impose heavy taxes on cars and motorbikes, so people will think carefully (excogitate) before buying ones.

In conclusion, the increase in using this environmental friendly vehicle is intractable, andsolutions are available to mitigate the problem. this part of the sentence does not make sense, you should re-wirte this conclusion.

hoping this is useful for you.

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