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Book lovers believe that reading habit is beneficial for their imagination as well as language skills. I have recently read a book called 'The Salmon', written by Ahn Do Hyun. This book has suceeded in araising my excitement for its unique plot. The central character in the story is quite different - the only completely silver salmon in a shoal of fish whose darker colored backs. Silver Salmon wants to break away from the confines and conformity of the shoal and achieve something on his own. The tale promotes individualism superior to the communal approach. Besides, it teaches us about circle of life, the need to care for environment and that the easy way is not necessarily the best way. This book reminds me of a bedtime story, one to be shared from generation to generation.

 

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Book lovers believe that reading habit is beneficial for their imagination as well as language skills. I have recently read a book called 'The Salmon', written by Ahn Do Hyun. This book has suceeded in araising my excitement for its unique plot. The central character in the story is quite different - the only completely silver salmon in a shoal of fish whose darker colored backs. Silver Salmon wants to break away from the confines and conformity of the shoal and achieve something on his own. The tale promotes individualism superior to the communal approach. Besides, it teaches us about circle of life, the need to care for environment and that the easy way is not necessarily the best way. This book reminds me of a bedtime story, one to be shared from generation to generation.

 

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Book lovers believe that reading habits is beneficial for their imagination as well as language skills. I have recently read a book called 'The Salmon', written by Ahn Do Hyun. This book has suceeded in araising my excitement for its unique plot. The central character in the story is quite different - the only completely silver salmon in a shoal of fish whose darker colored backs. Silver Salmon wants to break away from the confines and conformity of the shoal and achieve something on his own. The tale promotes individualism superior to the communal social approach. Besides, it teaches us about circle of life, the need to care for environment and that the easy way is not necessarily the best way. This book reminds me of a bedtime story, one to be shared from generation to generation.

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