Every childen wants to become a new good person when they star having a job. I also wish for a good job in the future and I dream of being a business man. My most respectable teacher said that: " Any country wants to develop rapidly and increase people life, it's economy must develop first". I realized that we each has to use our talent in other to resolve national problem of bad economic situation so becominng a businessman is the best idea ever I can give out for myself. Business job needs a lot of skills such as good observation, overcoming stress effort and confident comunication but I am always ready for a challenging working evironment, I will try more. Futhermore, my future job will be a well-paid job if I devote enough for it. With huge passion for this job, I think I will have no difficulty making my dream comes true by studying hard. "Pratise makes perfect", I believe I can gain the fruit if I never give up.
it's economy must develop first". => its
I realized that we each has to use our talent => have
making my dream comes true => come