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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree. 

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Some people afraid that teenager will be negatively affected when they go to work too early. They want children to go to school and work well in academic areas. However, I totally disagree with that. Working as well as studying academic subjects seem to be wonderful opportunity for children with some following reasons.

First of all, Studying and practice is must. We are unable to study only theory and knowledge in books. Practice will help them to remember better and longer. Making mistakes is also seen the assessment how well they learn at school. Children have more chances in order to do it again until they are successful.

Secondly, there are more and more children who are successful without qualifications. Finding out and enhancing their strength make them to work passionately and then create such valuable masterpieces. For distance, a child are talented in singing and dancing. They will be even more successful when they spend time for practice and enhance their ability instead of studying full-time at school.

Finally, keeping children in the comfortable zone bring nothing but their need of escape. The constantly modern and develop society will stimulate children to be curious about the outside world. They will encourage to figure out what they passion and want to do the rest of their life. It must be what they love to do and the final reason of going to school is to work successfully in your own majors.

In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea of helping children to work and study at the same time. It will help them not only shorten the time of building their permanent job path but also be more successful in the future.

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