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As a student i'm always busy with my schooling, i rarely have free time but when i do, i usually spend time watching films.
I love watching film because it helps to me relax and it also helps me to learn about other cultures.i sometime watching with my friend but personally,i prefer watching a lone as i can really focus on the film. As long as the film is interesting i don't mind watch it at home or at the cinema. Recently, i went to cinema to watch "Civil War", a fantastic film directed by Anthony Russo and Joe Russo. You should watch this, the film will definitely astonish you with excellent special effects and a deep storyline but understandable. In conclusion, there are many leisure activities that people can choose, but for me watching films is the watching films is the most interesting leisure activity.

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As a student, I'm always busy with my schooling, I rarely have free time but when I do, I usually spend time watching films. I love watching the film because it helps me relax, and it also helps me to learn from other cultures. I sometimes watch with my friend but personally, I prefer watching alone as I can really focus on the film. As long as the film is interesting I don't mind watching it at home or at the cinema. Recently, I went to the cinema to watch "Civil War," a fantastic film directed by Anthony Russo and Joe Russo. You should watch this. The film will definitely astonish you with excellent special effects and a deep storyline but understandable. In conclusion, there are many leisure activities that people can choose, but for me, watching films is the watching film is the most interesting leisure activity.   
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As a student, i'm always busy with my schooling, i rarely have free time but when i do have free time, i usually spend time watching films.
I love watching film because it helps to me relax and it also helps me to learn about other cultures.i sometime watching with my friend but personally,i prefer watching a lone alone as so i can really focus on the film. As long as the film is interesting i don't mind watch it at home or at the cinema. Recently, i went to cinema to watch "Civil War", a fantastic film directed by Anthony Russo and Joe Russo. You should watch this, the film will definitely astonish you with excellent special effects and a deep storyline but understandable. In conclusion, there are many leisure activities that people can choose, but for me watching films is the watching films is the most interesting leisure activity.

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As a student, I'm always busy with my schooling, I rarely have free time but when I do, I usually spend time watching films. I love watching the film because it helps me relax, and it also helps me to learn from other cultures. I sometimes watch with my friend but personally, I prefer watching alone as I can really focus on the film. As long as the film is interesting I don't mind watching it at home or at the cinema. Recently, I went to the cinema to watch "Civil War," a fantastic film directed by Anthony Russo and Joe Russo. You should watch this. The film will definitely astonish you with excellent special effects and a deep storyline but understandable. In conclusion, there are many leisure activities that people can choose, but for me, watching films is the watching film is the most interesting leisure activity.   
 
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As a student I'm always busy with my schooling learning, I rarely have free time but when I do am in my free time, I usually spend time watching films (phần nghĩa nên xem lại).
I love watching film because it helps to (tớ chưa bao giờ thấy mẫu câu 'help + to_V') me relax and it also helps me to (sao bên kia 'help me+ V' mà đây lại 'help me + to_V' nhỉ) learn about other cultures.I sometime watching with my friends but personally,I prefer watching a lone alone as so I can really focus on the film. As long as the film is interesting I don't mind watch it at home or at the cinema. Recently, I went to cinema to watch "Civil War", a fantastic film directed by Anthony Russo and Joe Russo which starred Chris Evans, Scarlett Johanson (nhắc đến phim là giới thiệu ngôi sao diễn viên, chứ không phải đạo diễn). You should watch this, the film will definitely astonish you with excellent special effects and a deep storyline but understandable. In conclusion, there are many leisure activities that people can choose, but for me watching films is the watching films is the most interesting leisure activity.

 

P/s: khi viết chữ 'i' (nghĩa là tôi) thì ta nên viết hoa nó 'I' như trên mình đã sửa vậy.

 

 

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