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Nowadays, more and more graduated students find it ( it ở đây là cái gì ) hard to get a job. The competitions ( cạnh tranh cái gì ) come not only from other students but also from older people. Personally, I think this( this ở đây là cái gì ) could lead to many problems and solutions should be found out to tackle it.
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(Nowadays , more and more graduates feel uneasy to gain a specific job where not only young candidates , but also many older ones must be involved in relativelly competitive rounds in order to demonstrate why they are qualified for the position. This increasing phenomenon could bring a lot of problems , but it seems to be possible to deal with , as discussed below )
The competition in jobs between young and old people can cause a lot of problems. Firstly, the proportion of unoccupied people ( mặc dụ unoccupied nghĩa tiếng Việt là nhàn rỗi , nhưng nó chỉ dùng cho object , không ai nói unoccupied people , mà phải là unemployed people ) will increases as more people fight for the same job. From that (Therefore,Thus....), the amount of social problems will grows up. Secondly, the distribution in jobs will be effected ( effect là noun , affect là verb ) as some jobs will be competed by too many people while some will be applied by very few. Thirdly, failed applicants may have to work in unfavored jobs so they cannot work with the best quality.
In order to eliminate this, solutions must be given. Considering the education, the requirements to be accepted to the fields which attract too much people in universities must be higher ( không hiểu ??). For the jobs which attract less people the working conditions must be upgraded to attract more labours and equalise the job distribution. Lastly ( Firstly chưa có mà sao có Lastly ?) , companies should train the workers before they start working and they should be encouraged to take extra courses for developing necessary abilities.
Generally speaking, the job competition between young and old people is a big problem but with suitable solutions, it can be limited
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