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Topic: Nowadays fast-food becomes more popular among youngster. Is it positive or a negative trend ? Give your reasons and examples.

Task:
     It is true that fast-food becomes more and more popular among young people nowadays. Some people belive that the tendency is positive while others do not. However, I am for the latter view.
     Firstly, human’s health was effected by components included in convenient food. Fast-food often contains a lot of cooking oil which has been used for many times. Therefore, the users would contract many diseases. For example, the high calorie level in fast food can cause some dieseases such as obesity, cardiovascular disease or even diabete. Secondly, using fast-food could be the cause of polluting the environment. The large number of shell food can be waste uncontrolled on the road, in the sewers,… and bring about soil pollution, air pollution and water pollution.Thus, it has been causing significant damage for human’s life. Last but not least, fast-food can makes losted the values of tradtional food. Obviously, the tranditional food not only presents the culture and customs of one people but also builds up the diversification of the cusines in the world. Instead, fast-food will not be put into the same place with traditional food.
     In conclusion, I belive that fast-food will bring tremedous bad problems although it still has many benefits, including degrade the health of human, the environment and makes people have fogot the national traditions. We should make good choices and decide what to put in our bodies. By this way, we will avoid being ill, have the healthy life and help the community than more.
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  In conclusion, I belive that fast-food will bring tremedous bad problems although it still has many benefits, including degrade the health of human, the environment and makes people have fogot the national traditions. We should make good choices and decide what to put in our bodies. By this way, we will avoid being ill, have the healthy life and help the community than more. 

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