There is an old Vietnamese idiom sayings “Mother's darlings are but milksop heroes”, that is to say, mother’s education is one of the most important benefit in teaching . An educated mother will give an educated child (it doesn't make any sense) . Therefore, I strongly support of in taking an equal number of famale and male students in universitiesy.
First and foremost, according to In accordance with human rights, both boys and girls can go to school and learn whatever they wantone,such as, history,science, art...They have the same potentials to develop their own specific abilitiesy,it is which are not based on their gender. In the world’s history, there are numerous of male scientists, artists of musicians but we cannot deny the contribution of women , namely, Marie Currie, Mother Teresa and Irene Joliot Currie – Marie Currie’s daughter. Marie Currie – the female I admired the most- is was an excellent student in university and was the first woman to who won two Nobel prizes in two diffent areas, that iswas, Physic and Chemistry. She is well-known for finding the 96th element, which has helpeds people to treat cancer by using radioactive. ( Ví dụ nhiều hơn lập luận là sao ? )
Beside, it will help female students to have more opportunitiesy to research in many fields. As the result, they will help their country in terms of economic and social contributioneconomy, industry, social. Not only mean go to work and build a wonderful world but also women, they have the same ability and chance to help their country develop.
More importantly, it makes gender discrimination reduced. In some developing countriesy, there are still have some places where girls are not allowed to must not go to school. For example, in feudal, China is one of the most a few countriesy which is well-known for gender discrimination. In China, only men could go to school, go to work, and keep hold important positionplaces, while women only do the housework. ( câu này quá lủng cung )That makes women weaker than men. I believed that we should have a brand new mind ? that men and women are equal.
To sum up, I would argue contend that universitiesy should welcome the same number of male and female students due to the fact that they both have the same capacity and also support gender equality.
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