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In mordent society, the growth of popular consumer goods is easy to understand. It is claimed that the effect of advertising is the main result off the high sales of these product. Although I agree that advertising impact on turn over sales of consumer goods, I believe that the development of quality of human life is also other reason for this fact.

It is undoubted that advertising is increasingly develop as well as economic growth. Enterprises concentrate on this part because they forecast how advertising makes benefit for them. In recent years, many companies give information of goods by many methods, may types of media as television, Internet, Radio, Magazine…So habitant can approach these information easier and faster. Besides, with using attractive aspect as imagination, sound, content…, advertising has enough factor to affect the hobby, desire of customers. So almost people tend to decide to buy goods before thinking about their real demand.

In addition, demand of people life when society become develop also an other reason for increasing sales of popular consumer goods. Not like before that human only buy something for minimum requirements of their daily activities, nowadays they use other goods for other their aspect of life as entertainment, health, sport… For example, customer buy clothing not only for their wearing demand, but also for their fashion hobby.  The change of standard living lead to change the choice of consumers in goods.

In conclusion, it is couldn’t denied the important role of advertising in the development of consumer goods sales. This effect attribute changing habit of consumers. However, standard living also play a key roles for increasing the sale of consumer goods.
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In mordent society, the growth of popular consumer goods is easy to understand. It is claimed that the effect of advertising is the main result of effective marketing is the only factor leading to the high sales of these products. In my opinion, although the significant impact advertising has on sales turnover is inevitablethe contribution of increased living standards is impossible to ruled out as well.

On one hand, undoubtedly that advertising, marketing and PR are fundamental to generating demands and driving sales. is increasingly develop as well as economic growth. Enterprises concentrate on are likely to make massive investment in this part sector because they forecast how advertising makes benefit for them can boost profitability. In recent years, many Accordingly, most corporations have a tendency to introduce promotional campaigns through television, Internet, radio, magazine and the like so as to attract more customers. By using  creative and influential commercials, marketers are able to subtly manipulate consumer behaviour, inspiring people  to buy goods no matter they are essential or not. This is an obvious evidence showing the crucial importance of advertising.

In addition, On the other hand, the shift in public demand in modern society is also a other vital reason for increasing larger sales of popular consumer goods final goods (cố gắng paraphrase nhé). (Not like/Unlike) before (that/when) human consumers only buy bought/purchased something for minimum requirements of their daily activities out of basic necessity. nowadays they  also consider other needs such as entertainment, health or personal interest. For example, customers now buy clothing not only for their wearing demand, but also for their fashion hobby.  Apparently, better quality of life has allowed people to have more varieties of choices when shopping.

In conclusion, it is couldn’t denied no one can deny the (important/critical) role of advertising in the development of consumer goods sales final goods' sales development. Especially with the advance in marketing industry as can be seen in recent years, This effect that promotional activities attribute changing habit of consumers is out of question. However, the improved standard of living is similarly vital to the increase in turnover.
 

 

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In mordent society, the growth of popular consumer goods is easy to understand. It is claimed that the effect of advertising is the main result of effective marketing is the only factor leading to the high sales of these productsIn my opinion, although the significant impact advertising has on sales turnover is inevitablethe contribution of increased living standards is impossible to ruled out as well.

On one hand, undoubtedly that advertising, marketing and PR are fundamental to generating demands and driving sales. is increasingly develop as well as economic growth. Enterprisesconcentrate on are likely to make massive investment in this part sector because they forecast how advertising makes benefit for them can boost profitabilityIn recent years, manyAccordingly, most corporations have a tendency to introduce promotional campaigns through television, Internet, radio, magazine and the like sas to attract more customers. By using  creative and influential commercials, marketers are able to subtly manipulate consumer behaviour, inspiring people  to buy goods no matter they are essential or not. This is an obvious evidence showing the crucial importance of advertising.

In additionOn the other hand, the shift in public demand in modern society is also a othervital reason for increasing larger sales of popular consumer goods final goods (cố gắng paraphrase nhé)(Not like/Unlike) before (that/when) human consumers only buybought/purchased something for minimum requirements of their daily activities out of basic necessity. nowadays they  also consider other needs such as entertainment, health or personal interest. For example, customers now buy clothing not only for their wearing demand, but also for their fashion hobby Apparently, better quality of life has allowed people to have more varieties of choices when shopping.

In conclusion, it is couldn’t denied no one can deny the (important/critical) role of advertising inthe development of consumer goods sales final goods' sales developmentEspecially with the advance in marketing industry as can be seen in recent years, This effect that promotional activities attribute changing habit of consumers is out of question. However, the improved standard of living is similarly vital to the increase in turnover.
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