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Task: You have chance to go on a holiday for two weeks. You have a choice to either go abroad or remain in your own country for this vacation. What is your choice?

You should give reasons for your choice and the benefits you would gain from this experience. 
 
If I get an opportunity to have a two-week vacation, I will decide to go overseas instead of traveling in my country. 
Firstly, I am a wanderlust person and desire to pay a visit to different countries around the world. I can explore their new cultures, special customs and try to taste traditional cuisines. Furthermore, going abroad will help me to open my horizon and enrich my reservoir of knowledge. For example, when you visit Singapore, you must keep the fresh environment, like do not dram on the walls, ban throwing rubbish messily. People say that “when in Rome, do as the Rome do”, we must obey the law, otherwise, we may be put in prison if we rebel them. 
Secondly, one of the most things I like when going to another country is to experience a new life, study to adapt with globalization. In our globalizing world, it is essential to be mixed myself in their daily life. Moreover, I can be familiar with their language that is not like I study at school or some languages I have never seen before. 
Last but not least, I can gain experience about how to be more confident, learn about preparing for a long-distance trip. The more places I travel, the more things I obtain to my best recollection. 
In conclusion, I do believe that foreign trips golden chances to everyone, and I am no exception. This brings a lot of benefits and remarkable memories on vacatio
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If I get an opportunity to have a two-week vacation, I will decide to go overseas instead of traveling in my country because of some sevaral réasons
Firstly, I am a wanderlust person and desire to pay a visit to different countries around the world. I can explore their new cultures, special customs and try to taste traditional cuisines. Furthermore, going abroad will help me to open my horizon and enrich my reservoir of knowledge. For example, when you visit Singapore, you must keep the fresh environment, like do not dram on the walls, ban throwing rubbish messily. People say that “when in Rome, do as the Rome do”, we must obey the law, otherwise, we may be put in prison if we rebel them. 
Secondly, one of the most things I like when going to another country is to experience a new life, study to adapt with globalization. In our globalizing world, it is essential to be mixed myself in their daily life. Moreover, I can be familiar with their language that is not like I study at school or some languages I have never seen before. ( theo mình thì việc học ngôn ngữ này ucxng 1 phần thuộc về knowledge mà bạn đã đề cập ở trên)
Last but not least, I can gain experience about how to be more confident, learn about preparing for a long-distance trip. The more places I travel, the more things I obtain to my best recollection. 
In conclusion, I do believe that foreign trips golden chances to everyone, and I am no exception. This brings a lot of benefits and remarkable memories on vacatio
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