Products such as food, gadgets, clothes,...have forever been an indispensable parts of our life, for their having fulfilled our basic needs. So important the products are that Those products are so important that when it comes to choosing them, there hasve been controversial ideas opinions between about the price and the related quality of the products themselves. Whether the less expensive conventional-made products outweigh the home-grown organic food in terms of their quality? In this essay, we will take both the advantages and the disadvantages into consideration and then come to conclusion if the advantages are greater than do outweigh the disadvantages. ( Ban nên state opinion trong phần introduction, và outweigh lặp lại quá nhiều )
Firstly, to what i'm aware of to the best of my knowledge, consumers have every rights to purchase anything they want, as long as they're satisfied with what they buy. Very recently, there has been a debate over the quality of the organic food and conventional food. The home-grown one, on the one hand, is very expensive while On the other hand, the conventional one is much affordable less expensive ( đừng lặp lại từ less expensive nhiều quá) , but . However, according to the Food Beliefs Paper, 80% of the organic food advocates for organic food claim that they feel re feeling insecure about consuming conventional food . Therefore, the cheaper products which are being consumed by a great number of people everyday, may have bad poor quality. The chances are that it takes less both time and money to grow less expensive crops, producing more economical gadgets, or clothes ? ( clothes, gadgets grow được a?),... that as a result the producers often tend to forget about the "satisfaction" of their buyers. So, it's suggested that people should be fully aware of when it comes to buying cheaper products, and makeing sure that the products come from reliable sources. However, from my perspective, "the quality always goes along with the price"
Secondly, we still have to come to terms that sometimes cheaper products do not mean bad qualities. In Japan, it has been shown that products made in Japan are not as pricy as imported products( what do you mean by saying that ). Additionally, everyone knows about the qualityies of the "made in Japan" labels gadgets, especially electronic devices. So, it's not the price that decides on everything, sometimes we stil have to look into the actual hidden quality. Moreover, buying stuffs from our local markets means supporting the domestic production ( bạn nên xem lại cách dùng the, ko phai luc nao cung dung the duoc ), encouraging factories on in their activities as well as supporting the government onin the exporting actions. Finally, we still have to accept that buying cheaper products goes along with saving money, in which consumers still enjoy great qualitiyes yet have to pay little amount of money.
All in all, I think the advantages outweigh (exceeds ) the disadvantages, as long as the consumers are conscious when buying of products with the quality of less high-priced products expensive price. (bạn dùng less expensive hơi nhiều )
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