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Đề thi IELTS Writing task 2 - 19/03/2016 - People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?


 

 

Products such as food, gadgets, clothes,...have forever been an indispensable part of our life, for their having fulfilled our basic needs. So important the products are that when it comes to choosing them, there has been controversial ideas between the price and the quality of the products themselves. Whether the less expensive conventional-made products outweigh the home-grown organic food in their quality? In this essay, we will take both the advantages and the disadvantages into consideration and then come to conclusion if the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages. 

Firstly, to what i'm aware of, consumers have every right to purchase anything they want, as long as they're satisfied with what they buy. Very recently, there has been a debate over the quality of the organic food and conventional food. The home-grown one, on the one hand, is very expensive. On the other hand, the conventional one is much less expensive, but according to the Food Beliefs Paper, 80% of the organic food advocates claim that they're feeling insecure consuming conventional food. Therefore, the cheaper products being consumed by a great number of people everyday, may have bad quality. The chances are that it takes less time and money to grow less expensive crops, gadgets, or clothes,... that the producers often forget about the "satisfaction" of their buyers. So, it's suggested that people be fully aware when it comes to buying cheaper products, make sure that the products come from reliable sources. However, from my perspective, "the quality always goes along with the price" 

Secondly, we still have to come to terms that sometimes  cheaper products do not mean bad qualities. In Japan, it has been shown that products made in Japan are not as pricy as imported products. Additionally, everyone knows about the qualities of the "made in Japan" gadgets, especially electronic device. So, it's not the price that decides on everything, sometimes we stil have to look into the actual hidden quality. Moreover, buying stuffs from our local markets mean supporting the domestic production, encouraging factories on their activities, the government on the exporting actions. Finally, we still have to accept that buying cheaper products goes along with saving money, in which consumers still enjoy great qualities yet have to pay little amount of money. 

All in all, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, as long as the consumers are conscious when buying products with less expensive price.

Rating: 3.95
đã góp ý 19 Tháng 3, 2016 bởi seung.doo (7 điểm)
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The question whether lower price should be applied to many different products or not is a quite controversial issue in our society.It is clear that this topic has both pros and cons but i think that the benefit outweigh drawbacks. To be specific, this essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and give my opinion.

On the one hand, it is widely argued that cheaper product could bring some adverse effects on many aspects of our community. Firstly, if the cost of some specific goods continue going down due to a heated competition among many sucessful companies, the quality of product will not be surely guaranteed simply because the producers are more likely to skip many necessary steps to ensure that they have to obtain a acceptable profit. Secondly, many small businessmen might be in trouble with their trade because of some attractive offers from some huge corporation.

On the other hand, I think that it is more beneficial to many targets especially consumers if cheaper product are sold in the market popularly.  A good reason is there are plenty of luxurious but important equipments to our lives which is unaffordable with people who live in poverty or are unable to work so this trend can lead to an vital improvement of living standard in many populated areas. Moreover,this pattern could increase the figure of sales in many supermarkets or shops which means that many other fields of economy might develop remarkably.

In conclusion, this matter is not only advantageous but also harmful in some perspectives but i firmly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks .
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đã góp ý 19 Tháng 3, 2016 bởi nhatbarca200010T1 (56 điểm)
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It is true that low-priced products could be purchased easily on the market. While I accept that there are both benefits and drawbacks of this issue, I would argue that it brings more disadvantages.
 
On the one hand, consuming low-cost goods may benefit in some ways. Firstly, the poor can easily access to essential merchandises and services. This could result in a poverty reduction and raise the living standards. Secondly, when products become cheaper, destitute people may have enough financial condition to take some courses to enlarge their knowledge and skills. Consequently, they could enhance their resume, applying for some higher paying jobs and even promote economic development owing to improvement of the quality of workforce.
 
On the other hand, I believe that acquiring low-priced products would cause several drawbacks, which is outweighed its benefits. One reason is that cheap goods would have a low quality, which may have negative influences on people's health. For instance, food additives and preservatives in low-cost food might cause many dangerous diseases such as eating disorder, food poisoning, cancer. Furthermore, it is undeniable that consuming cheap goods would create imperfect competition market, where the quality of products is not placed on top. If some companies just operated only for profit, there would have some several adversely affects for other companies, which attach great importance to the quality of goods and consumer's health.
 
In conclusion, although purchasing cheap products brings both cons and pros for consumers, it seems to me that there are more drawbacks.
 
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đã góp ý 22 Tháng 3, 2016 bởi chunghihukake (7 điểm)
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People these days in many countries can consume cheaper products. While I accept that there are drawbacks of that thing, I would argue that it may bring more benefit.

On the one hand, citizens using cheaper products are disadvantageous to some extent. Firstly, it can have a diverse influence on the natural environment. When people consume more products and services, the company will raise outcome production. Thus, disposals could be more created and the natural resources could be more exhausted. Consequently, our living environment, as well as the ecosystem, are put a threat in danger. Secondly, it may have a negative impact on culture and indigenous practices. Due to cheap ticket’s price, tourists have tendency travel more and more these days, but they may be rowdy or wear unsuitable clothes, which might have an undesirable influence on local young people who imitate easily immodest or provocative behavior and fashions.

On the other hand, it seems to me that people can consume products with a lower price because of undeniable advantages. The first reason is that it helps enhance human’s living standard. People these days could easily get access to various products and services.  For instance, due to modern technology developing and reasonable price, each individual can make it easy to own television that helps them feel refresh from the bombardments of work, such as enjoy entertainment programs, films or game of sports. The second reason is that it contributes to the economic development of the host country. In tourism, for example, the more foreign tourists, the more money spent on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel in the host country.

In conclusion, I believe that there are many advantages for people who use cheaper products, although this trend has some notable disadvantages.

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đã góp ý 25 Tháng 3, 2016 bởi thunang (21 điểm)
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Products such as food, gadgets, clothes,...have forever been an indispensable parts of our life, for their having fulfilled our basic needs. So important the products are that  Those products are so important that when it comes to choosing them, there hasve been controversial ideas opinions between about the price and the related quality of the products themselves. Whether the less expensive conventional-made products outweigh the home-grown organic food in terms of  their quality? In this essay, we will take both the advantages and the disadvantages into consideration and then come to conclusion if the advantages are greater than do outweigh the disadvantages. ( Ban nên state opinion trong phần introduction, và outweigh lặp lại quá nhiều )

Firstly, to what i'm aware of to the best of my knowledge, consumers have every rights to purchase anything they want, as long as they're satisfied with what they buy. Very recently, there has been a debate over the quality of the organic food and conventional food. The home-grown one, on the one hand, is very expensive while  On the other hand, the conventional one is much affordable less expensive ( đừng lặp lại từ less expensive nhiều quá) , but . However, according to the Food Beliefs Paper, 80% of the organic food advocates for organic food  claim that they feel re feeling insecure about consuming conventional food . Therefore, the cheaper products which are being consumed by a great number of people everyday, may have bad poor quality. The chances are that it takes less both time and money to grow less expensive crops, producing more economical  gadgets, or  clothes ? ( clothes, gadgets  grow được a?),... that as a result  the producers often tend to  forget about the "satisfaction" of their buyers. So, it's suggested that people should be fully aware of when it comes to buying cheaper products, and makeing sure that the products come from reliable sources. However, from my perspective, "the quality always goes along with the price" 

Secondly, we still have to come to terms that sometimes  cheaper products do not mean bad qualities. In Japan, it has been shown that products made in Japan are not as pricy as imported products( what do you mean by saying that ). Additionally, everyone knows about the qualityies of the "made in Japan" labels gadgets, especially electronic devices. So, it's not the price that decides on everything, sometimes we stil have to look into the actual hidden quality. Moreover, buying stuffs from our local markets means supporting the domestic production ( bạn nên xem lại cách dùng the, ko phai luc nao cung dung the duoc ), encouraging factories on in their activities as well as supporting the government onin  the exporting actions. Finally, we still have to accept that buying cheaper products goes along with saving money, in which consumers still enjoy great qualitiyes yet have to pay little amount of money. 

All in all, I think the advantages outweigh (exceeds ) the disadvantages, as long as the consumers are conscious when buying of products with the quality of less high-priced products expensive price. (bạn dùng less expensive hơi nhiều )

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đã góp ý 9 Tháng 4, 2016 bởi Lizzie90 (93 điểm)
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The question whether lower price should be applied to many different products or not is a quite controversial issue in our society.It is clear that this topic has both pros and cons but i think that the benefits outweigh drawbacks. To be specific, this essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and give my opinion.


On the one hand, it is widely argued that cheaper products could bring some adverse effects on many aspects of our community. Firstly, if the cost of some specific goods continue going down due to a heated competition among many sucessful companies, the quality of products will not be surely guaranteed simply because the producers are more likely to skip many necessary steps to ensure that they have to obtain an acceptable profit. Secondly, many small and medium sized businessesmen might be in trouble with their trade because of some attractive offers from some huge corporations.

On the other hand, I think that it is more beneficial to many targets especially consumers if cheaper products are sold in the market popularly.  A good reason is that there are plenty of luxurious but important equipments to our lives which is are unaffordable with for people who live in poverty or are unable to work so this trend can lead to an vital significant improvement of living standards of living in many populated areas. Moreover,this pattern could increase the figure of sales in many supermarkets or shops which means that many other fields of economy might develop remarkably.

In conclusion, this matter is not only advantageous but also harmful in some perspectives but i firmly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks .

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đã góp ý 9 Tháng 4, 2016 bởi Lizzie90 (93 điểm)

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