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The line graph given provides details about the adult unemployment rates in Britain from 2993 to 2012.

As can be seen, In the United Kingdom the quantities of people who were 16-24 years old experienced a rise while the others saw a decrease over the period.

In the capital of the Great Britain, The information of young adult unemployment who aged from 16 to 24 years old started with 22%, hitting the lowest point at 15% in 1999, levelling off over the following 3-year period before reaching the highest point at 25% in 2012. The figure for the rest of the joblessness began at just under 15% then dropped by 5% at the end of the period.

For those who were living outside of London, the proportion of 16-24-year-old adult that were unemployed went down over the first 10 year-period. After that, it soared to just over 20%. The figure for other unemployment only decreased by 2.5 percent over 20 years.


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The line graph given provides details about the adult unemployment rates of young people in Britain from 2993 1993 to 2012.

As can be seen, In in the United Kingdom the quantities number/amount of people who were 16-24 years old experienced a rise while the others saw a decrease over the period.

In the capital of the Great Britain, The the information of young adult unemployment who aged from 16 to 24 years old started with 22%, hitting the lowest point at 15% in 1999, levelling off over the following 3-year period before reaching the highest point at 25% in 2012. The figure for the rest of the joblessness began at just under 15% then dropped by 5% at the end of the period.

For those who were living outside of London, the proportion of 16-24-year-old adult youngsters that were unemployed went down over the first 10 year-period. After that, it soared to just over 20%. The figure for other unemployment only decreased by 2.5 percent over 20 years.

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