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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why?Who benefit more from this, the community or these young people?

That young generation nowadays usually come to developing countries or underdeveloped countries in their short holidays to attend voluntary activities like become teachers to teach poor children help or  build infrastructure for the local citizens.  In my opinion, I suggest that maybe probably both the youngers  and the local residents have many benefits from this actions. This essay aims to discuss some cause of this issue.

Many causes make the youngers decide to join in social activities in third countries. Firstly, most students or who have graduated want to add your profile a list of community activities mainly because most of the companies usually require their candidates have a impress curriculum vitae. So  they try to participate in doing unpaid work in some poor nations to make their resumes more brightening. Besides, the others actually want to assist poorer civilians maybe because they aware of many problems that the poor citizens in developed countries have to face like lack of teachers in some disadvantages areas, terrible status of works. Attending activities like building house, road improvement or even volunteer teachers, to name just a few also a way to express their attention to the poor in underdeveloped countries.

However, no one can deny that the advantages from charity programs by the young to the local citizens and the government. First of all, many children who have difficulties in attending school can have the opportunities to continue their studies by assistance from foreign volunteer teachers. For example, in areas meeting with difficult, children forced to leave the school or even they cannot go to the school like the same ages simply because they have to earn the money to support their families. Although, many the young foreign teachers from wealthy nations willing come to poorer regions and teach the children without fee.   Last but not least, the government cannot support all the families that get trouble in finance annually, so if the foreign volunteers help the residents built house, it would reduce the pressure of the poor on the government.

In conclusion, the youth in recent years from wealthy counties have trend of come developed nations and do works that they do not need require any ask about salary. It definitely not only bring many profits for the young but also the civilians in difficult countries. 

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1. like + ving : Like becoming
2. some causes
3. add their profile ( nên hạn chế từ your, trong câu này dùng your k phù hợp với chủ ngữ )
4. have an impress...
5. muốn đưa ra ví dụ thì bạn không nên chỉ dùng  toàn like nhé : for example, take st for example, st be a classic example, st be shown by ...
6. willing to v
7. trend of coming
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