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According to researchers, the number of teenagers who work while they are a student has been on the increase. Although some people say that having jobs while being a student will bring some problems for their study and health. Personally, I believe that it is a good idea for teenagers to go to work for several reasons as follows:

On the one hand, part-time jobs can effect students in some ways. Firstly, if they are working several hours a day, they do not have enough time to complete her/his homework and prepare for the next lessons. As a result, they may find it hard to acquire and improve their knowledge what they learn at school. Secondly, working while studying will deprive their time sleeping or playing sports. Teenagers are in the process of building up their body. They need to take exercise, eat and sleep properly. These above reasons impact some people and made them think that doing work while being students is negative.

Nevertheless, I contend that the advanatages of having part-time jobs by far outweigh its disadvantages. It is clear that having a part-time jobs help students to learn important skills. In many cases, teenagers can have opportunities to learn team working. In the future, while working, students will be required to collaborate with other members to finish or obtain the goal of an organization. Besides, having jobs will teach students the time management skill. They have to arrange properly their time of day to achieve good academic study and working. This skill helps them to make an effective plan and stick to do it.

Last but not least, there is no doubt that having a job when being a student can allow teenagers to improve their personalities. Working makes students know how to save money, because students appreciated of labor and understand that making money is not easy. Moreover, students can be more sociable when they are given a job. For example, when students work with people who come from different religious or culture, they have a lot of chances to gain knowledge and improve their foreign language.

To sum up, it is no doubt that having a part-time brings a varity of benefits for students about the society and person. If teenagers have a properly plans, it can be argue that the advantages of having part-time jobs help students a lots at present and in future
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