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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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The line chart illustrates the number of thefts in four European nations from 1999 to 2009.

Overall, the figure for thefts in all four nations fluctuated over the period of 10 years. Furthermore, Great Britain saw the highest remain during the period shown.

In the 1990-1993 period, the number of thefts per thousand vehicles in Britain fluctuated, although it always remained above 15 thefts. Moreover, in the following 3 years, the Britain thefts increased sharply to about 19%, which was its highest point during the 9-year period. Throughout the remainder of the period, there was a gradual decline in the number of thefts, which fell to 16% by the year 1999. France also saw a marked fluctuation from 1990-1995, and then gradually dropped to 6% by 1999.

From 1990 to 1996, the number of Swedish thefts increased slightly to exactly 12%. Throughout the remainder of the period, its number remained above 10% and then saw a significant rise by the year 1999. Canadian experienced a gradual decline, falling to 6% in 1993. By the year 1999, the number of Canadian thefts has smoothly increased to 8%.

 

 

 

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From 1990 to 1996, the number of Swedish thefts increased slightly to exactly 12%. Throughout the remainder of the period, its number remained above 10% and then saw a significant rise by the year 1999. Canadian experienced a gradual decline, falling to 6% in 1993. By the year 1999, the number of Canadian thefts has smoothly increased to 8%.

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