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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

Topic: It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that a change has both advantages and disadvantages, but the change brings more benefits to people doing it rather than by evading or resisting. Personally, I strongly agree that profits of change are heavier than drawbacks.

On the one hand, making the necessary changes may have cons. A change will require too much time and the attempt of a person who does it. At one time or another, most people may embark on an effort to change some part of themselves or their lives. For example, individuals may decide to stop smoking, to start saving, to drop a few pounds or to get a new job. As a rule, these sorts of changes would not occur overnight. They need to take time and effort to overcome the tough period. Additionally, changes often evolve from a subtle, complex and circuitous progression that involves thinking, hesitating, stepping forward, stumbling backward, and quite possibly, starting all over again. These requirements may be reasons for some people trying to avoid or resist change in their life.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that changes have much more pros than cons. Firstly, changes will help each individual to create personal growth. Anyone will grow and learn new things every time something changes. They will discover new insights about different aspects of their life. Furthermore, changes will make persons easily adapt to new situations and new environments. As a result, they may become more flexible, more developed, and stronger. Secondly, changes may bring choices for happiness and fulfilment. When someone turns from usual path there will be plenty of different opportunities waiting for him. From time to time changes make people re-evaluate their life and look at certain things from a different perspective. Depending on what the change is, it also reinforce their life values.

In conclusion, change has some disadvantages such as it needs time and effort, but I am a true believer that the advantages of change mentioned above will make people live better.

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It is true that a change has both advantages and disadvantages, but a change brings more benefits to people doing it rather than by evading or resisting it. Personally, I strongly agree that profits of change are outweighted the drawbacks. 

On the one hand, making the necessary changes may have cons. A change will be required too much time and the attempt of a person who does it. At one time or another, most people may embark on an effort to change some part of themselves or their lives. For example, individuals may decide to stop smoking, to start saving, to drop a few pounds or to get a new job,etc.. As a rule, these sorts of changes would not occur overnight. They need to take time and effort to overcome the dark period. Additionally, changes often evolve from a subtle, complex and circuitous progression that often involve thinking, hesitating, stepping forward, stumbling backward, and quite possibly, starting all over again. These requirements may be the reasons for some people trying to avoid or resist change in their lives. 

On the other hand, I strongly believe that changes have much more pros than cons. Firstly, changes will help each individual to create his or her own personal growth. Anyone will grow and learn new things every time something changes. They will discover new insights about different aspects of their lives. Furthermore, changes will make people easily adapt to new situations and new environments. As a result, they may become more flexible, more developed, and stronger. Secondly, changes may bring choices of happiness and fulfilment. When someone turns from his usual path there will be plenty of different opportunities waiting for him. From time to time changes make people re-evaluate their lives and look at certain things from a different perspective. Depending on what the change is, it also reinforce their life values. 

In conclusion, change has some disadvantages because it needs time and effort, but I am a true believer that the advantages of change mentioned above will make people live better and they will likely enjoy their lives more.

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It is true that a change has both advantages and disadvantages, but the change brings more benefits to people doing it rather than by evading or resisting them. Personally, I strongly agree that profits of change are much more than its drawbacks. 

On the one hand, making the necessary changes may have great ulilities.It requires people to pay much attention and put considerable effort on things they are doing as a way of motivating. For example, individuals may decide to stop smoking, to start saving, to droping a few pounds or to get a new job. As a rule, these sorts of changes would not occur overnight. They need to take time and effort to overcome the difficult period. Additionally, changes often evolved from a subtle, complex and circuitous progression that involves thinking, hesitating, stepping forward, stumbling backward, and quite possibly, starting all over again. These requirements may be reasons for people trying to avoid or resist change in their life. 

On the other hand, I strongly believe that changes have much more pros than cons. Firstly, changes will help each individual to create personal growth. Anyone will grow and learn new things every time something changes. They will discover new insights about different aspects of their life. Furthermore, changes will make persons easily adapt to new situations and new environments. As a result, they may become more flexible, more developed, and stronger. Secondly, changes may bring choices for happiness and fulfilment. When someone turns from usual path there will be plenty of different opportunities waiting for him. From time to time changes make people re-evaluate their life and look at certain things from a different perspective. Depending on what the change is, it also reinforce their life values. 

In conclusion, change has some disadvantages such as it needs time and effort, but I am a true believer that the advantages of change mentioned above will make people live better.

 

 

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