Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or reaching sports to younger children).

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

                One of my favourite idioms is that “You cannot create experience. You must undergo it.”. In 21st century, experiences is the most major thing in the world, it helps us to develop in almost faces. Hence, pupils should do as many volunteer works as possible to receive background by applying volitinal task to senior school. I will state my opinion on the following points.

                First of all, doing volunteer aids helps students get chances to get prarical knowledge. In school, students generally lack a realistic experience so that they should have more travels and outdoor activities. Those activities make pupils more persistent, more self-confident and more patient. Also, it’s a good opportunity for students to learn more and change their life by comprehending the new experience. For examples, thanks to help old people in nursing home, teenagers studying in high school can learn how to cook and get along with adults.

                Second of all, it not only benefits students, but aslo contribute to the development of the country. For instance, cleaning the streets, banks and working for a charity are all supportive activities to society. We all know that the budget of the government is limitted and if we can aid the community, it means that we are helping our country.

                Many people argue that this operation is useless and time-cosuming. Those people might be right because this operation will not help increasing any score for students. Nonetheless, what this argument overlooks is knowledge isn’t just numbers and it isn’t always contained in school.

                To sum up, unpaid community sevice should be a compulsory part of high school progammers for the benefits of students in the future. 

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major nên thay bằng key, chief,hoặc primary element nhé

almost faces không hay, nên là the majority of aspects 

practical nhé, 

mà thanks to bạn viết sai cấu trúc rồi, thanks to +n/ving

t nghĩ thêm that thì câu để khó hiểu hơn .what this argument overlooks is that knowledge isn’t just numbers and it isn’t always contained in school.

t nghĩ là bài này dựa trên ý của cậu thì có những lỗi sai này nhưng tớ thấy về phần idea thì chưa được rõ ràng và hay.

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 Second of all, it not only benefits students, but aslo contribute to the development of the country. For instance, cleaning the streets, banks and working for a charity are all supportive activities to society. We all know that the budget of the government is limitted and if we can aid the community, it means that we are helping our country.

                Many people argue that this operation is useless and time-cosuming. Those people might be right because this operation will not help increasing any score for students. Nonetheless, what this argument overlooks is knowledge isn’t just numbers and it isn’t always contained in school.

                To sum up, unpaid community sevice should be a compulsory part of high school progammers for the benefits of students in the future. 

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