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To day, the internet is the important part of the life because we now live in the "information age". The internet has many helpful things. Yet, there risks and bad effects when using it.

     first of all. The internet is widely used in every where such as offices, research istitutes, in formation center and education. The internet has greatly raised the accuracy and efficiency of work, The internet asist us on our work by many ways,it can provide good a lot of information for support studying and make transfer payment, pay bill and buy anythings throught the internet.it make our life somuch easier.

     on the other hand, the inter nethelps to connect friendships and love thought such as skype, face book, zalo. the internet brings the revolution about information and knowledge.

   Despite, the internet which has alot of advantages, but have also some disadvantages, we should admit.

the  internet can provides wrong information because anyone can post anything on theinternet. more and more, the young were addicted game online on the internet, they can become crime because the lack of the moneyfor playing. you can waste alot of time on  the internet.

in addittion, some hackers can use the internet for indentify theft. tf we don't use the internet carfully, you will get some troubles.

    in general. the internet has been a major source of information and leisure that i help us on the studying or the working. the internet are not bad, bad or good that it depend on your way. you should use the internet by carefully ways.
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To day, the internet is the important part of the life because we now live in the "information age". The internet has many helpful things. Yet, there risks and bad effects when using it.

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To day, the internet is the important part of the life because we now live in the "information age". The internet has many helpful things. Yet, there risks and bad effects when using it.
 With the development of living standard, the Internet plays an important part of our lives due to its convenience.However, Internet has also dangerous things that we can damaged.In this essay, I will find advantages and disavantages from it.

     first of all./On the one hand, The internet which has useful functions is widely used in every where such as offices, research istitutes, information center and education. So,the internet has greatly raised the accuracy and efficiency of work. The internet asist us on our work by many ways  ,it can provide good    We are able to find a lot of good information which support studying and working. Besides, we can use the Internet to transfer payment, pay bill and buy anythings throught the internet.it make our life somuch easier. on the other hand the inter nethelps to connect friendships and love thought such as skype, face book, zalo. the internet brings the revolution about information and knowledge.
Moreover, we can also communicate with family and friends, watch films, listen to music on the Internet. It is one of the most popular entertainments.

   Despite, the internet which has alot of advantages, but have also some disadvantages, we should admit.

the  internet can provides wrong information because anyone can post anything on theinternet. more and more, the young were addicted game online on the internet, they can become crime because the lack of the moneyfor playing. you can waste alot of time on  the internet.

in addittion, some hackers can use the internet for indentify theft. tf we don't use the internet carfully, you will get some troubles.
On the other hand, Internet has aslo many drawbacks which are not good for us. There are many violence, crime, sex which seem very popular on the social networks. In addition, using too much Internet can be addicted and affect health problems. Nowadays, some teenagers are obesity and poor-eyesight in the world; likewise, working and learning is disturbed.
     In conclusion, I think Internet has a bad side that affects to everybody if they use too much. Nevertheless, it could be helpful to people if they use it moderately.
 
 
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