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MÌnh đang tập luyện IELTS bằng cuốn Basic IELTS writing, giai đoạn đầu. Sau đây là  bài Thanks you letter trong chương 1 và 2 bài Request Letter chương 2 mà mình vừa hoàn thành. Mong mọi người góp ý

ĐỀ 1: You have just come back from San Francisco. When you were ther, your friend Mr Jackson gave you a great deal of help. Write to him to thanks for his hospitality and help ( 100 words)

Dear Mr Jackson

I'm writing this letter to thank you for your assistance when i was in San Francisco

During my stay, you had helped me to feel like home. This was the really first time i had ever been in another country, so that it would be very difficult without your help. You gave me some good advices such as where to go, what to do how to deal with culture shock etc. Therefore, i had a wonderful time there

I'm very much embalm to your hospitality and kindness, it was such a privilegde for me to get your help. Please. when ever you visit VietNam, have no hesitation to contact me so i will have chance to reciprocate your kindness.

Your sincerely

ĐỀ 2: The English deparment has decided to hold an English contest in late December, but your classmates find that it is too near the final examination. Write to the Dean of the department to suggest a change of the time

Dear Sir or Madam

We are student of class 36. We are writing this letter to respectfully request for the postponement of the English contest which to be hold on 27th December.

The reason for this requirement is that on the 1st January, we going to finish our term and take the final test. It will take us a lots of effort and concentration, therefore, we can not handle both in the same time. We are really want to participate in the English contest as this chance is of great value for us to develop our English skill

It will be a great new for us if it is possible to postpone the contest after the final test so that there will be more time  to prepare carefully

Hopefully, our requirement will be considered

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully.

ĐỀ 3: You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposit. Writie a letter to the landlord. In your letter: 1) explain why you are writing. 2) ask for the return of your deposit 3) inform the landlord of possible legal action

Dear Alice

I'm Thanh, who rented your apartment 3 months ago. I'm writing this letter to request the return of the $1000 deposit money that i paid

As i was informed, these money will be paid back if the room wont have any damage. I strongly ensure that when i left, there was no breakages or problem and it was still in standard state. Strangely, when i phoned your office, they told me my money won't be returned .

So I respectfully request that you should return my $1000 within the next two weeks. I suggest so because i need that amount of money for my next term's textbooks and stationery. After the deadline without my money back, i might seek to legal adivce from my lawyer for the sake of mine

Your sincerely
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