There are several mistakes in your paragraph:
- It helps us to reach out of (I think it should be "to apply it in work and the life") the work, to and discover new lands, concepts and people
- In your example, you shouldn't use "you" because it will refer to readers.
- Secondly, reading books is a good idea that we should come up with when we are under suffer from stress because it helps to both our mind and soul relax release our pressure/ fresh our mind
- Many people say that they feel entirely comfortable while reading books as it distracts them from all the problems they bump into in life (support for the second opinion => If people have troubles in their lives, enjoying books may relax themselves)
- At last, reading books will improve our (the) command of communication owing to (in order to) increasing our (the) vocabulary
- To sum up, I suggest we spend more times reading books everyday (=> it is recommended that people should spend time on reading books because of its huge benefits)