The bar chart provided shows shows the percentage of/ gives data on the difficulties people have when they move to immigrants encounter when moving to live in another country by age/ according to the range of ages and how these problems vary according to age groups.
Overall, the greatest problem for the 18-to-34-year-old 18-34 age group is organizing finances, which is experienced by 35 percent of people in this age group. This is also a significant for other groups with 29 to 34 percent of people in each group finding it hard. (cái greatest có lẽ không đúng như em nói vì cột tím rõ là mạnh nhất) (ngoài ra, nếu đã 1 câu về cái the highest thì nên có 1 câu về the lowest) (tuy nhiên, em cũng có thể dùng câu overall thứ 2 để nói xem 2 nhóm còn lại lần lượt đánh giá thế nào)
Thirty-two 32 percent of people in the youngest group have difficulties in arranging medical care. In comparison, the oldest group and the middle age group both find this more problematic. The percentage of people who have problems with medical services is higher, at (nối thẳng vào đây luôn) with 36 and 37 percent respectively. (đã theo văn phong, bố cục của bài mẫu thì hơi khó sửa)
In contrast to healthcare, only 2 percent of people in the over-55-year-old group have troubles/ problems with finding schools for their offspring are affected by finding schools for their children. However, it is very hard for young and middle age people to solve the education problem. There are 6 and 19 percent of finding it difficult in each group. This problem, on the other hand, is second highest/ most problematic for the people aged between 18 and 54 with...
In generation, all age groups experience the same problems to some extent, but the percentage of middle age people who have problems related to money is much higher than others. (câu này để làm gì vậy) (đã có overall thì khỏi in conclusion)
Cụm sort out anh tra thử thì như kiểu chia chác sau hôn nhân, giải quyết giấy tờ linh tinh nên anh chưa có ý kiến gì về hai từ organize hay arrange như em dùng.