em mới tập viết mọi người check giúp đề : advantages and disadvantages of the buses
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nowadays, buses play an important in travelling of people in some modern and big cities such as LonDon, New York. Vietnamese people are familiar with buses recent years like the way to reduce traffic jam. however, buses bring not only merits but also demerits.

on the one hand, taking the buses could bring a wide range of advantages. firstly, people could save a great deal of money by doing this. the price of buses are cheaper than that of other transportations due to using ticket blocks for month.secondly, it is very convenient and comfortable because there are so many different routes to choose.bus is public transport, therefore it work at most of coners of city. in adition, bus always at most day, anytime in years or some special days.

althoung taking the bus has many advantages, there still  exist some noteworthy disadvantages. fisrtly, this might to be take much time to take the bus to go to where they want. for example, many people have to wait a long time to catch the expected bus, because each bus works every 5 to 20 minutes. somtimes, they got stuck in traffick in the rush hours and so they will late for work. secondly the services on the bus are not good. the bus assitants is rude, especialy, they never pay small change for passenger. morever, these assistants do not stop or pick people up right place. it is so dangerous to do this

in conclusion, taking the bus is worth considering to improve the current situation, but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing such a policy
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Mình chỉ góp ý kiến cá nhân thôi nhé vì mình cũg chỉ mới tập viết ielts thôi, mong k nhận gạch đá:p
câu vietnamese people...traffics jam thì mình thấy là bus thì đa số là nguyên nhân gây ra traffic jam chứ chưa thấy reduce bao h :))
By doing this ---> by taking buses có vẻ ổn hơn
Bus is public ---> bus is a public..
It work---> it works
bus always at most day...special days ----> buses, they moving from this station to that station every 5-10 minutes all day and they don't take day-off or holidays except for Tet
to where they want ---> to where you want
( vì mình nghĩ đang mình nên xưng w ng đọc là bạn chứ nếu đọc vào đến nơi họ muốn thì cũg chả biết họ là ai, dùng "you" có vẻ hợp lý hơn)
Đọan mà example cho việc mất thời gian mình nghĩ là bạn nên đổi thành do phải đi bộ từ trạm đến nơi mình cần sẽ tốn thời gian bì thật ra k phải trạm buýt nào cũg gần nơi mình học, làm việc cả. Nếu là tốn thời gian vì phải hờ huyến xe thì cảm giác bị mâu thuẫn với bên advantage vì đoạn trên bạn nói là rất comfortable và convenient vì có nhiều tuyến
xe.
Disavantage nữa là nhiều xe dồn qá số ng --> dangeous (cái này mình tự thêm nếu mà k thấy hay thì b cũg k cần để tâm
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cảm ơn bạn rất nhiều vì đã cất công check dùm. thanks a lot

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