it is argued that university students should study a full range of subjects instead of some specific subjects.to what extent do u agree or disagree?
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Our world has been in the period of globalozation which bring about many opportunities for people to develop integrally.some advocate that university should apply a full range of subject schedule for all students instead of concentrating on oly professional subjects.personally,university students can benefit more from this schedule.

On the one hand, most of the students can fulfil themselves better by broading their horizons.Not only do they receive many pivotal skills in our likebut they also gain a wide range of knowledge.each student will get a deep insight into the glorious victory in the past of the heroes's generations through history's lessons.they are enven more knowledgeable ablot the nature surroundings and other nations in the world through geography.whereas,in coping with many receipts or numbers in math and physics,students will express their expertise by inventing many technological equipment utterly useful in our life.

on the other hand,learning different subjects will improve the caeer prospects in the future for all of the students.current recruiters show a tendency to employ graduators who can do a various array of jobs.therefore,in a competitive world students need enrich the area of study.moreover, that our society has been altering is the reason why the importance of being a versatile person is indisputable.for example,a director wanting to enlarge the investment of a company need to learn from inernational market.so if they have a practical visit,they must be adaptable to the life style,the custom of this country that can be gained through many subject in the university.

By way of conclusion, learning different subjects does wonders for university students.it has a positive impact on both social aspects and every individual.

 

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Bài của bạn đã có cố gắng sử dụng nhiều từ vựng lạ, bao gồm cả good collocation.

Tuy nhiên, topic sentence của đoạn 1 chưa rõ ràng: On the one hand, most of the students can fulfil themselves better by broading their horizons.

Câu topic này có vẻ chưa link với a wide range of subject trong đầu bài lắm. Từ horizon nghĩa của nó rất rộng.

Bạn nên thêm là: by broading their horizons with a variaty of subjects.

1 số lỗi khác: wanting: ko dùng want dạng ing

Bạn nên viết hoa đầu mỗi câu để người đọc theo dõi tốt hơn nữa :D

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