It is argued that salary is the most essential factor when you choosing (đỏi thành choose) your job. Although i agree with(bỏ with) that salary is the major effect when you get a job, i disagree that it is the most important factor. ( is an important factor but it is not the most one)
On the other hands, (bỏ) for some people are looking for a job, the only thing they care about is the salary. Because with them,money is extremely important in order (không cần thiết)for people to meet their daily basic needs.For example, money is used to buy food, pay bills, housing, health care. It do not stop in there, (nên dùng moreover)they also have to carry their children, their family. If the job does not provide them sufficient money, they cannot (can not) have a comfortable life. So( therefore) for some people money is the most factor to chose jobs.
On the other hands,(on the other hand) i believe that there are many other significant factor(factors) to consideration (consider) a job. First, the enjoyable is very important. Some people do their enjoyable work(works chú ý Their) just because they like it, they do not care about any things else. For example( có thể thay bằng "for instance" vì đoạn trước đã dùng cụm này) , volunteers help people just because it makes them felt (feel) happy , they do not even care about money they do it for free. (bỏ)
In conclusion, while salary certainly affects people’s choice of career, I do not believe that money outweighs all other factors when choosing a job.
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