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Topic: Today,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you argee or disagree?

Nowadays,the effect of advertising is one of the greatest evidence for the high amount of best buy consumer goods,I completely agree with this opinion.However,some people think that these products are not the real needs of the society,what I disagree in some extent.

Advertisements usually advertise various kind of goods,even if it useful or harmful,as long as they meet the society needs.It would not help anything selling things no one  would buy,though how better they have been marketed.Desktop telephone,for instance,is now out of fashion because  of smart phone development,that is the reason why now desktop telephone no longer appear on advertisements.

Advertisement can provide rapidly and exactly variety of information as well as images about products they have.Indeed,when you want to buy something,you just browse advertisements on google or turn on shopping channels on TV,they furnish fully necessary information of that product such as usage,origin,feature...If you want to know more details,you could call directly to their customer care service,in some companies it is free.

Furthermore,advertisement appear with great frequency in every sort.For example,you can caught advertising after morning news,when you surf Internets,while going for a walk or reading magazines and newspapers.Advertising give you the best chance to purchase everything with reasonable price.The power of advertisement is even expressed in that you can buy things which are not available in your city or country without going anywhere by express delivery services.Therefore,consumers can buy anything at anytime easily and quickly.

In conclusion,advertisement is always the most effective selling tool which could increase more and more amount of popular consumer goods.All the useful information and pictures of goods are supplyed in advertising and with the dense frequency of it,we now can buy anything we want in many defferent ways.However,I believe that almost these products which are advertised are our actual society needs.

 

 

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Topic: Today,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you argee or disagree?

Nowadays,the effect of advertising is one of the greatest evidence for the high amount of best buy consumer goods,I completely agree with this opinion. (...consumer goods.(dấu chấm) I completely agree with... /hoặc goods, which I completely agree with.). However,some people think that these products are not the real needs of the society,what which I disagree in some extent.

(First of all), advertisements usually advertise various kinds of goods,even if it they are useful or harmful,as long as they meet the society needs.It would not help anything selling things no one  would buy, though how better good they have been marketed. A desktop telephone, for instance, is now out of fashion because of smart phone's development, that which is the reason why for the fact that now desktop telephones no longer appear on advertisements.

In addition, advertisements can provide rapidly and exactly a variety of information as well as images about products they have. Indeed, when you want to buy something, you just browse advertisements on google or turn on shopping channels on TV. They furnish fully necessary information of that product such as usage,origin or feature...(bỏ cách liệt kê ... trong academic writing). If you want to know more details, you could call directly to their customer care service, in some companies it is free.

Furthermore, advertisements appear with great frequency in every sort. For example, you can caught advertising after morning news, when you surf the Internets, while going for a walk or reading magazines and newspapers. Advertising give you the best chance to purchase everything with reasonable price.The power of advertisement is even expressed in that you can buy things which are not available in your city or country without going anywhere by express delivery services.Therefore, consumers can buy anything at anytime easily and quickly.

In conclusion, advertisement is always the most effective selling tool which could increase more and more amount of popular consumer goods. All the useful information and pictures of goods are supplyed in advertising and with the dense frequency of it, we now can buy anything we want in many defferent ways. However, I believe that almost these most of the products which are advertised are our actual society needs.

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