ip.chuawriting
Post bài mới
Thành viên với 10 points trở lên sẽ được sửa bài bởi Team Writing 7.5 từ IELTS Planet - Học IELTS Online.
Bắt đầu nhận xét ở mục "Bài chưa có góp ý" để bắt đầu kiếm point nhé.

2.3k Bài viết

3.2k Góp ý

2k bình luận

21.2k thành viên

32 Le Quang Dao street

Ha Noi, Viet Nam

11th, November, 2014

The headmaster of local newspaper

13 Xuan Thuy street,

Cau Giay, Ha Noi.

 

Dear Mr. Pham Dang Binh,

            I am writing on behalf of a children's home to inquire your help to publicize for the voluntary vacancies on this special month, called "Beloved Winter" which we are organizing.

            There are various activities planned for the program, which will happened at the end of November. Therefore volunteers are much more requested at the weekends. We happily announce the recruitment for winter 2014. Applicants are asked to submit a letter writing for choosing programs and clarifying your desires and motivations for participating and what you hope to gain in the project and obtain the family commitments on Wednesday, 12nd, November. The most important requirement is that candidates need to be sympathetic and really willing to help disabled and homeless children.

            I would be most grateful if you could pass on and advertise the recruitment in the local newspaper published next week. We will sure that you will agree that because both volunteers and children might have huge benefits gained from such a project. First, children can obviously be supported and assisted by society because the goal of programs is children's happiness and warmness in the winter.

            Secondly, our children's home is potential and non-profit organization in Vietnam bringing a series of dynamic and experienced activities, which is a good destination for who are eager for enjoying every single moment in volunteering within a multicultural atmosphere. Cooperating and communicating with other volunteers from different regions in Vietnam, volunteers can learn in an excellent environment which can create more changes to challenge themselves. Also, being a volunteer means that candidates can give one hand to better our society through meaningful volunteering work. We assure to bring you a huge number of opportunities to show off and enhance your skills which is hardly found in somewhere else.

            For more information about the recruitment process,  please carefully read the Candidate Booklet or contact us by email childrenshome@gmail.com. The official results will be announced at noon on Sunday in the newspaper. I would appreciate if you could inform me as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

 

Your sincerely,

Le Thi Thu

Rating: 3.23
đã hỏi trong Other bởi (16 điểm)
share bài về Wall để xem lại ===>

Xin vui lòng đăng nhập hoặc đăng ký để góp ý bài viết này.

1 góp ý

0 phiếu

Mình nhớ là viết thư tiếng anh ko được thụt đầu dòng vô như z :)

Dear Mr. Pham Dang Binh,

I am writing on behalf of a children's home to inquire your help to publicize for the voluntary vacancies on this special month, called "Beloved Winter" which we are organizing.

There are various activities planned for the program, which will happened happen at the end of November. Therefore volunteers are (much more) requested at the weekends. We happily announce the recruitment for winter 2014. Applicants are asked to submit a letter writing for choosing programs and clarifying your desires and motivations for participating and what you hope to gain in the project and obtain the family commitments on Wednesday, 12nd, November. The most important requirement is that candidates need to be sympathetic and really willing to help disabled and homeless children.

I would be most grateful if you could pass on and advertise the recruitment in the local newspaper published next week. We will sure that you will agree that because both volunteers and children might have huge benefits gained from such a project. First, children can obviously be supported and assisted by society because the goal of programs is children's happiness and warmness in the winter.

Secondly, our children's home is potential and non-profit organization in Vietnam bringing a series of dynamic and experienced activities, which is a good destination for who are eager for enjoying every single moment in volunteering within a multicultural atmosphere. Cooperating and communicating with other volunteers from different regions in Vietnam, volunteers can learn in an excellent environment which can create more changes to challenge themselves. Also, being a volunteer means that candidates can give one hand to better our society through meaningful volunteering work. We assure to bring you a huge number of opportunities to show off and enhance your skills which is hardly found in somewhere else.

For more information about the recruitment process,  please carefully read the Candidate Booklet or contact us by email childrenshome@gmail.com. The official results will be announced at noon on Sunday in the newspaper. I would appreciate if you could inform me as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your cooperation. co-operation.

Rating: 2.58
đã góp ý bởi (7 điểm)
thanks very much. <3

Tips: Thành viên với 10 points trở lên sẽ được sửa bài bởi Team Writing 7.5 :)
Bắt đầu nhận xét ở mục "Bài chưa có góp ý" để bắt đầu kiếm point nhé :)

Tham khảo các bài viết tương tự

...